Guerlain's Eau du Coq or Fleurs de Cedrat. Maybe Calyx, or Eau d'Orange Vert? Pamplelune is lovely but it does have a musky vanillic drydown which the o.p. may not like. C.O. Bigelow makes a Lemon edt that may work as well.
Again, Diorella. Also Eau Sauvage (jasmine), Eau de Rochas homme (somewhat herbal), and Moustache (peppery/carnation.) The great thing about Diorella is its overripe almost turned quality that is always pointed out. I think that the civet quality of Eau d'Hermes gives it a similar bent. Lemon/citrus should equal astringency and cleanliness. Making it dirty subverts the intention and makes it more fun.